The Beauty in Sinking Ships

The new writing begins. It's called "The Beauty in Sinking Ships", after a song by Kill Hannah, corrected by m'dead Charlotte (because if your English is best in whole damn school it doesn't yet mean it's perfect). I the parts will be long and I've only translated 5 pages by now, so allow me some time before they appear.
Oh, and my dreadlocks: (half of them. Click on the pic for the whole image)